Another great poem. I really liked this one. Another 5/5

Wow..thts awsome..i luved it ...it flowed good and it srota made me go in awe so good job =)

Wow I loved this one. It made me stop and think, and when I was done I had to reread it because I got so lost in it the first time. I really liked how it sounded like someone describing the sun with all its intense beauty and power and but this person also had a calming affect. The last line of this poem was breath taking and was the perfect end to this masterpeice. Such elegance and grace was shown in thie poem. Nice work.