It was different and pretty good. I for some reason didn't really get it. But you had great word choice and a nice flow. 4/5

This one is a bit diffrent, that is a plus. Again you amaze me. this one isn't as good as the others I have read of yours, the flow is a little off, but the well chosen words cover the tracks of that. the emtion was clear, but it wasn't as strong as I think it should have been. But then again that Is just what i think. Other than that you did a good job, I have to give this 4/5

Wow this was very different I really liked how you repeated the last line on the last two stanzas. Very interesting title however I'm not really sure how this is a life poem personally I think its a bit sad and should be under that category. But it wasn't to bad.