Cool one. I have alway associated flying with freedom. I'm glad you wrote a poem about it. Keep up the good work. 5/5

This one is well written, and really an excellent example of a double tanka. Again I admire you for chosing to write in diffrent styles. I like the word chose, and the emtion is strong this time. 5/5

Wow I loved this poem. It was very refreshing and it felt just like I was flying as I read this. Very short yet you managed to get the point across. "In a world of new hope" that was my favorite line of the poem, so powerful even thoug it was so short. Nice job.