Ohh i was surprise why this poet have down voting coz i can see that it flowed well. actually from the start u can feel how sweet the words what are expressing for..so i dont understand some readers just give POOR(2.0) for me its wonderful poet and over all its 5/5

Sweet, but some of the rhymes felt a little forced. other than I give you 5/5

Very nice, well written but i do agree with Vanessa and some rhymes did feel a little forced but it was still a great write and i enjoyed reading it.

The only thing I can possibly see wrong with this poem is that it's short. That's not really an issue here, though... you got your meaning across, and therefore this is an excellent poem. Very well written and easy for most readers to relate to. 5/5

Good poem.
It flowed well and the emotion was shown.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Nice sentiment, starts off with a strong rhythm and good flow but it kind of loses it a bit towards the end...
its a sweet poem though and the rhyming is good :)

kim xx

I also liked this one, but if you are going to ryhme try doing it through the whole poem, but its good, 5/5

This was cute. good job

I really liked how it flowed... but the last line.. I didn't understand.. sorry about other people down voting.. but that the way it goes sometime.. people think differently I GUESS .. anyway it was really good I like it.. so good job and keep up with the good work .. 5/5

This one is ok but the meanings in it r gr8. Why dnt u try a rhyming piece?

Its romanting one. again flow ofwords was good. take care 5/5

Wow!..cute poem...filled with love....very sweet write and the emotion was well penned through out the write!
Good job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

This is good other then a few grammer problems..lol.. but i understand what ur trying to say..my favorite line was ;"Yes, I need you all right
but don't let that get to your head." great job 5/5

Very good but didnt rhyme sometimes but overall it had great meaning 5/5

I like that poem. I can kinda relate. 5/5

RavEy!

I liked this one to. you started of rhyming but than after the first stanza there was nothing that rhymed. i gave you a 4/5 it was so sweet and the part where you said dont let it get to your head. it was funny (but it always gets to people's heads). it was great accept for a few grammer problems

The layout of htis pom was strange. It grew as it went on showing that you went into more detail near the ned. I really liked this idea. Nice write hun.

xxx alex xxx

I have to give you a 5/5 for this one, it was awesome, how anyone can downvite such a talented writer is quite beyond me.
Well done
love Tara-Kay
x

This was a really cool poem - the rhyme scheme (and partial lack of it) was very original, and you said things simply, yet very poetically. beautiful writing! 5/5!
~Claire