Beautiful poem. And it conveys a good message, at least to me, not sure if you meant to say waiting for sex to be right is better than doing it because it's what people do. That's what I got out of it, and that's a philosophy I believe in. Good job. (b^.^)b

This poem confused me in the beginning
because I thought you enjoyed it in the first and second stanza
but then I realized not
but its horrible you went through that
great poem

Each stanza of this piece was almost a mini-poem in itself. Even so, they were strung together nicely. Well done! :)

5/5 really nice poem...u kept the flow going and it turned out really great.....i really enjoyed reading it...keep doing what u do

much luv
peachez

I really liked it. there could have been more detail, but the one-sidedness to the story made it magnificent

I'm sorry if this really happened.
No one deserves to go through that.

The poem was good.
It flowed well and the emotion was shown.

Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Wow, i like this poem. You done a great job!!
I think i am able to relate to this, and I'm sure theres many more people that feel the same. 5/5

:)

I really enjoyed this. The style is really different, due to the short, fragmented lines, but it works. It's as if you're telling a strong, detailed story - with the most minimum words allowed.

Nicely done.

Diffrent style, a major plus, the flow is excellent, and the word choice is powerful. You did an excellent job.I can relate. the emtions are deep and strong/ 5/5

This poem was beautifully sad. I loved it and found it to be really interesting. I liked the style being short lines making it flow beautifully. Well done with this! 5/5 ~mel

Dat was good

I agree with all thease people
its so sad and no one deserves to go thru what was written here, but there are people out there that lie, and cheat and use others
but its all just a double standard sometimes :(
so sad. so very sad.

Wow this was such a sad poem. I really liked the emotion behind it and what I really liked the most was how each line in the stanzas were very short. Interesting job. The only thing I have to critique on is that its kind of typical of a rape poem I think that you should use more metaphores or something in it next time. But other than that I liked it.

WOW ur a AMAZIng poet.. u have a uniqueness that seperates it from other poems. keep it up! i LOVED this poem.. i was the perfect length and i loved how the stazas were short yet had detail. and overall a good message

Great poem.
well put.
5/5

Thatz a real deep poem.
Did u go through it or do u know somebody who has?