Salt In Our Wounds [2]

Wow I really liked this poem as well. I find it very hard to write poems that have a very structured order like the one you did now but you seemed to make it flawless. I'm sorry but I don't quite know what the style that you chose was so I wont be a big help there. This poem was very sad to me but I loved how you put it under the life category instead because it makes the reader look deep into it to truely understand why it's here. And I'm sure that I got the message Beautiful.

'A face so emotional it's hard to explain;
Hold the rope high for what you can't handle

my two favorite lines. The flow was magnificent, and the emtion was clear deep and strong. I really liked this one, the imagery was great, Intresting all the way though. Great job 5/5. I wish I could help you and tell you what its called, but I just don't know.

I loved it.
Your word choice was great and the flow was flawless.

'A face so emotional it's hard to explain;
Hold the rope high for what you can't handle.'

I loved it 5/5

[Sarah]

I loved the struture of this poem, it had a fluency because it was broken up, i know that doesn't make sense, but the structure matched the content. i also think the imagery you created was amazing and the repitition was both powerful and effective.