Push Me Away [2] {Terzanelle}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   May 10, 2007


Push me farther away; I don't need you,
Just tell me I'm a worthless [roar],
Push me farther away; I don't need you.

You're nothing but a stupid w|h|o|r|e,
Your high end insecurities will be your death,
Just tell me I'm a worthless [roar].

Step to the plate for your final breath,
You're nothing to me any longer;
Your high end insecurities will be your death.

I'll hold the rope for you; I'm so much stronger,
Just don't choke yourself too fast,
You're nothing to me any longer.

You've drug me down far in the past,
I can live without you by my side;
Just don't choke yourself too fast.

I'll hold on tight to that broke tide,
Push me farther away; I don't need you,
I can live without you by my side,
Push me farther away; I don't need you.
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1. A
2. B
3. A

4. b
5. C
6. B

7. c
8. D
9. C

10. d
11. E
12. D

13. e
14. F
15. E

16. f
17. A
18. F
19. A

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Wow. that was powerfully strong. I think near the end broke tide, should be broken tide. Other tahn that everything in this poem was absoulty perfect. I really like this. I might even try this style. You inspire me. lol the emtion was powerful this time, and the word choice fantastic. I like this more than all the others, you'll problay here that alot, after all i r/r/c 30 poems, so please don't take it personally if some of my comments sound the same. I still make it honest to the best of my ability, if I like it I will try to tell you why, if i don't I will try and tell you why then too. Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    VERY GOOD! I loved it! powerful, and great use of words babe! 5/5!

    -Liz-

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