VERY GOOD! I loved it! powerful, and great use of words babe! 5/5!

-Liz-

Wow. that was powerfully strong. I think near the end broke tide, should be broken tide. Other tahn that everything in this poem was absoulty perfect. I really like this. I might even try this style. You inspire me. lol the emtion was powerful this time, and the word choice fantastic. I like this more than all the others, you'll problay here that alot, after all i r/r/c 30 poems, so please don't take it personally if some of my comments sound the same. I still make it honest to the best of my ability, if I like it I will try to tell you why, if i don't I will try and tell you why then too. Great job.