Too little, too late [Double Etheree]

by Infected with His Deadly Love   May 10, 2007


Tears
Drop down
My smooth cheeks
As I'm thinking
About what we did have
And what we could of been
All the time we had together
All the hugs, kisses and love bits
I will miss it and never forget
You will always have a place in my heart
I'll cherish our memories always
For thats all I have left now
As you left me for that girl
I'm alone, for I was
Too little, too late
To tell you that
I love you
Now your
Gone

���© Sarah Elliott 2007

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  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, thats great! I love it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Linden

    Different, but a good different.
    4/5
    Because I thought it was missing something.
    It had a lot of emotion but it was as I said, different.

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww sad poem! Really liked it. Nice flow. Keep up the great work!:)

  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    For a poem that doesnt have the perfect flow and rhyme... i liked it enough to give it a 5/5 :) which is usually not like me for this kind of poem. :)

    very well done you did an excellent job on it.

    -Lith

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem, I now how that feels. kind of sad really. I loved this poem keep up the great work. 5/5