For the most part the stucture was really good I enjoyed the way you put the whole rhing together.
I think you lacked abit more exsamples of your sorrow or woes but for the most part you did well for as short as it was. Plot121...

"You will always have a place in my heart
I'll cherish our memories always"

I love etheree's and this double one was a double whammy!!
That couplet i highlighted was so bittersweet.
You should be proud of this piece =)
5/5
*gem*

Very good poem, I now how that feels. kind of sad really. I loved this poem keep up the great work. 5/5

For a poem that doesnt have the perfect flow and rhyme... i liked it enough to give it a 5/5 :) which is usually not like me for this kind of poem. :)

very well done you did an excellent job on it.

-Lith

Aww sad poem! Really liked it. Nice flow. Keep up the great work!:)

Different, but a good different.
4/5
Because I thought it was missing something.
It had a lot of emotion but it was as I said, different.

Wow, thats great! I love it.