by Robert May 10, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
How would you express yourself if you had just five minutes to live, |
by Jaymes Haze
So, this is like the flash before your eyes just before you die and your thoughts on it? |
by Rocky
That was a real interesting poem. i like the topic you chose and the questions you asked. |
by VYXSIN
I really really love this poem, it freaken amazing!! i like this one more than the other one, yea i really really like this poem. |
Another 5/5 dude. You have talent! Do you rap or something, because the flow in the last poem and this one, I could put a beat to it easily. Well, just pointing that out. Very good, keep it up. :) |
by Ashley Ann
I am so glad to have read this poem. I would give you a 10/5 if I could.. Notice that some of your words got messed up by the computer because you added an apostrophe. This website does not like apostrophe's apparently. lol. In my opinion this poem makes you think really hard about what you would do if you were in that position. So at the end of the poem, you are left in a calm mood thinking about that. So I recommend you change the "!" to a period at the very last sentence. You have such EXCELLENT talent! (can I have some?lol) Not only am I going to give you a 5/5 but I am adding you to my favorites. I would like to read all of your poems when I get the chance. have a nice day! God bless! |