Comments : Goodbye, but Not Forever

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    Love the poem Keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by A girl broken until

    Lol jade, i didnt know you wrote poetry,
    and was that train thing from final destination 3 at the end lol!!!!

    But it was a good poem, i like it.

    10/5

  • 17 years ago

    by shadowknight

    Beautiful heartfelt poem
    my favorite stanza being

    I'll come back, I promise,
    And sit beside you.
    Tell you of my adventures,
    As the sky begins to fade blue'

    such a true poem
    5/5