When I read the title I thougt it was going to be way different to this.
I absolutely love, love this poem.
Out of one little picture you captured this big thing.
The imagery was great.
5/5

[Sarah]

I liked it :) that picture is so cute,
tis amazing how yooh have got such a great poem outta just one pic ^_^
Great as always 5/5 :)

~*~Jen~*~

Gem
This paints such a wonderful picture for the minds eye. Excellent job. Great imagery.

One by one, their small noses point upwards
Tipped ears perk up, fragile yet strong
Harmonious howls and shrill acute barks
As the wolf cubs sing their very first song

I really loved this stanza. It is perfect :)
Take care love Cindy

The description in this was really done well, I think it was the description and the way you played out the scene that did this poem so well Great job I gave it a five and I don't give 5s alot lol keep up the good work Plot121

I was very impressed with the visual imagery this poem envoked when I read it. Its was both natural and mystical. Well written!

I dunno but for some reason i just absolutly adore wolfs, maybe its their mythical presence, or their ferral fury when you get their pray everything about them is amazing :) i love this poem :) I have a different one the way, and i was suprised to see my x coment on my poem :S dunno what to think of her comment 'i do care' anyway this poem is great as always 99/5 :P

How innovative! Indeed, this is something to be proud of. I loved how it progress in a way which keeps me reading it through with a rather wonderful, mysterious plot and intensifying atmosphere. 'Twas well-worth my time. Simply a joy to read! Well done, ma'dear! Keep them coming. :) Love, Debbie

OH! The Tagalog poem is about a person getting confused with the stares and glances of another person. While being astounded, she realized the sole 'reason' of this and found herself falling for this individual. It's quite sweet! That's why I decided to post it back in its original language/version. (It wouldn't sound good and would lose its profundity when translated to English.) =) Thanks for the comment, sweetie! Love, Debbie

Ohhhhhh how beautiful!
When I viewed the picture, I was already smiling and thinking 'I'm going to love this, it's about wolves'
And you certainly did the picture justice!
Flawless flow, beautiful imagery and enjoyable word choice and rhyme scheme.
I adore this!

This is really beautiful. I liked the words you used in that poem. Great job!

What's not to be proud of? It's so fabulous! 5/5

You should be proud of this piece. it is absolutely incredible. i'm so happy for you. you have grown so much since you first started writing at this site. it is absolutely incredible.

love it.

5/5.
Erin

Amazing, you truly have a talent, excellent work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

I wonder how glad i would be if you could share with me why you are proud of this piece of work. Its a gr8 poem. i loved it

Written very well. I loved it. 5/5 Keep up the good work
Check mine out please

You have a lot of reason to be proud of this piece Gem. Not a lot of ppl can write about animals and still be as poetic as when writing about love. But this is outstanding! I completely loved it! Ahh, the talent! :)
~Midnight Sun

A beautiful poem, i really enjoyed reading it

Unbelievable! That was really good.
I wonder, is there a topic that you can't write about. I don't think so, you're great.

You have every reason to proud of this poem. It is FANOMINAL!!! I'm just not sure if it should be under the dark section though. It's more of a beautiful nature piece.

5/5

Great job!!

Josie

Thanks for commenting me. gem ur poems are soo good. you could have a cureer writting poems u are so inspirational keep writting!