Comments : First Song

  • 17 years ago

    by sara

    This is a great piece of work and I saw the picture its amazing 5/5 indeed keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee nichole

    I freaggin love this poem...especially the end...i saw the picture and it goes perfect with it...your the best

  • 17 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    Hey!
    This is awesome!
    btw, sorry it took so long for me to respond.
    I don't have a computer anymore.

    *Katie out*

  • 17 years ago

    by Marissa Marzano

    That was beautiful..

    Marissa.

  • 17 years ago

    by cory

    Wow what a spectacular piece i hope i have half the skill u do someday.5/5

    cory

  • 17 years ago

    by cory

    Wow incredible job.This poem has an almost cosmic feel to it. i loved it.Keep it up!!= )

    Cory

  • 16 years ago

    by shantavia

    Wow the most beautiful poem i have read all day good job

  • First of all, that pic is so cute! and the poem was nothing like i was expecting. but i'm not one bit disapointed. it was great you have every reason to be proud of it! :)
    *Twiggy*