by Saul May 10, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
I lay here in the cold wet grass and stare intently |
by Lady Nik
The imagery in this one is so beautiful. I love how you write about the moon and the stars. very clever. Nik |
Wow. excellent. i've no idea what else to say but excellent! That wasn't what I'd thought it be and I'm glad. The ending is very nice. I loved it! <3 |
Wow this was very imaginie. i love it. i could see everything you were writing here thro my mind. and i before i go to skool i gotta look up at the moon. it's one of my favorite thing to see wen i wake up. i love this poem of urs as well The stars. my top 2 favorite. once again you did an amazing job. please do keep it up! =] |
Great imagery. When I was reading this poem I felt as though instead of staring at a computer screen I was there looking at the moon and listening to the words as. I. floated up to greet the moon. Great work it really drew me in. You'll have to write more some time. |
by Belle
A very captivating poem. I loved how I felt as though I was there watching over the Earth as this was happening. |