Great poem. The only thing I think you could fix the flow was a little off. Other than that it was great. 5/5

I liked this but i found the flow to be a little off in some areas and i think its because of the lines. You started off with nice long lines then in some stanzas you made them short losing the syllable count. I think this poem had a great meaning portrayed. Well done~mel

I really enjoyed reading that and took the message to heart. I thought the message was great.