by Miu May 10, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
The prettiest words you say. |
by ali
Awww this piece is sooo sweet!!! it really made me smile and go 'awww' while i read it, it has a positive glow about it and it's a really really good piece :D |
by Chelsey
Your first poem? |
I liked the ryhmes and structure of the poem, however; the flow wasn't that great. Overall it was a great write. Keep up the good work. |
I thought it was sweet, but it just wasnt all there for me, but one thing i noticed that you did was the first stanza didnt rhyme and neither did the last one, nice job, but i guess it was a pretty good poem but i have to give it a 4/5 |
by Brittini
Its really cute has good capitivation of emotions really liked it made me smile and the wording was great keep up the great work 5/5 |