Very nice, you did a good job capturing the emotions. Keep up the pen scratching...or keyboard banging

Good job on this one! Is this your 1st love poem!? Well you should write more! I enjoyed this one! I like the title ;) the flow was good! well penned! keep writing :)

Oh me likey! XDD. The flow was moving and I like your discriptions

For it being your first i thought that it was very good, i liked it because you channeled the way love really feels not what people interpret it to be, good job

This is a wonderful romantic poem that truly deserve a 5/5, you have done a great job.
i hope to see more of your great poems here, cause you are really talented. keep it up.
a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

And what a great job at your first love poem. the love and affection thru out this poem was extreme.

5/5 david

Sweet romantic work!!..if this 1 is your first..lol...u should dure write more....the passion is filled through out this wonderful write!5/5!
Kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

Aw such a cute and wonderful poem.
I really enjoyed this poem.
God Bless 5/5 <3Tay (^_^)

Mmm, it was a sweet poem, a few little things that confused me. But being your first love poem it was great.

Wasn't your best, but the flow was on.
Your message was very cute.

All in all, pretty good. 4/5 Keep writing!
~Ally~

Aw, that was so sweet. I liked the way that you used repitition, it took the feelings to a new level. Simple, but irresitibly cute. Keep up the good work.

Alyson

Very good job there was a lot of emotion in it and i think thats what made it so good and the repitition really added to it great job

Very nice, and romantic, for being your first love poem it is excellent, very sweet with lots of emotion

First stanza?
Eye catching, dearest.
I loved it.
Although…
Maybe you can change
“Preetiest”
It just sounds a bit
Immature?
And [[i]] been thinking of you since you left today.
Capitalized?
[[Your]] the most special person who makes me smile.
It’s “you’re” my dear :]
All in all, your grammar was pretty bad.
Lol.
But your story?
Fabulous.
But just because of your grammar…
4/5?

Short but very sweet... i really liked it a lot.. especially how you ended every stanza with the same line.. very well written and yes it is the little things that make us smile!.. great job .. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

Aww. this is sooo cute.. no way is it your first poem.. its so much better than my first... im so jealous.. lol...

It's so true that the little things are so special, it's important that you don't miss them. When your love is for this person has come to an end or atleast the relationship, it's the little things that we all remember and miss. Excellent first love poem 5/5

Ahaa very romanting poem. i loved you this way of expressing the words take care 5/5

Aw this poem was so cute, and your right its the little things that can really make you feel good inside not always the big things. Its nice to read a poem dedicated to them. Capitalize your I's and it will be better nice job.

Its really cute has good capitivation of emotions really liked it made me smile and the wording was great keep up the great work 5/5

I thought it was sweet, but it just wasnt all there for me, but one thing i noticed that you did was the first stanza didnt rhyme and neither did the last one, nice job, but i guess it was a pretty good poem but i have to give it a 4/5