Awwww...this is soo sad && sweet at the same time!! you're soooo talented!! but you dont always have to write emo poems you know!!! i <333 you!!

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I can realate to this poem in so many ways!! i had my heart tron into a thousand pices 5 months ago and the pain that i feel is the same the moment he said he no longer loved me!! you are very talented!!

love ashley!!:))

Awww that was amazing!.. i loved it!!!... 5/5 from me, and keep up the great work! i love reading your poems!

The poem was beautiful and very realistic. The use of emotion worked well and so overall it was a great job.
cheers, josh

HOLLY S***!! This is really good i totally understand how you feel... Do you do this... i think you do from our p.m but please dont do that girl i dont want you hurting yourself.. =( 5/5