The Roof

by beezy   May 10, 2007


Life on a high, I don't wanna come down,
Don't care about the world, Don;t care a dime
Months, Weeks and days don't matter anymore,
My life is on a high, and its mine .. mine .. mine

Life's a cool breeze, a stream of sweet water
Take a sip and let it flow by, let it fly by like time
Enjoy it till it lasts, work to get the dreams
My life is on a high, and its mine .. mine .. mine

Some days it feels bitter, just take it in the stride
The valleys are bound to be there, don't sit around to whine
Only focus on the hill tops, they are waiting to be crossed
My life is on a high, and its mine .. mine .. mine

A super fast moving car, whizzing past on the highway
That's what inspires the heart to cross the line
Adventure is in the blood, challenges in the air
My life is on a high, and its mine .. mine .. mine

Life on a high, I don't wanna come down,
Don't care about the world, Don't care a dime
Months, Weeks and days don't matter anymore,
My life is on a high, and its mine .. mine .. mine

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Sounds like a sing, but is a great poem, i really liked the flow and the whole concept, 5/5
    , keep up the good work

    --SIN

  • 18 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I really enjoyed this. The repetition was good. I like how it had such a positive atmosphere - always a good thing to read about. The flow was good and consistent.

    Nicely penned.

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    Wonderful poem!! I love the way that it flowed. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Cool poem, I really really liked it. I liked how you used nature to describe life. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Narphangu

    Seriously... You gotta put this to music!

    Sounds a lot like something Jack Johnson would do... But I dunno.

    Good job, nicely done!

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