I really enjoyed reading this.. it flowed well and your rhymes are good. I think that from what i have read your a great poet. Please keep up the awsome work. Dont stop writing. I give this a 5/5

That was amazing. the repeation, made the flow excellent, and the word choice was awesome. I could feel the emtion, but only barley, still well done 5/5

Seriously... You gotta put this to music!

Sounds a lot like something Jack Johnson would do... But I dunno.

Good job, nicely done!

Cool poem, I really really liked it. I liked how you used nature to describe life. 5/5

Wonderful poem!! I love the way that it flowed. *5/5*

Alyson

I really enjoyed this. The repetition was good. I like how it had such a positive atmosphere - always a good thing to read about. The flow was good and consistent.

Nicely penned.

Sounds like a sing, but is a great poem, i really liked the flow and the whole concept, 5/5
, keep up the good work

--SIN