Wow!
powerful poem
it is true that the world as we know it is very messed up we've got a war going on what for really? gangs in their thousands killing and hurting their own people. but people never open their eyes and perhaps they never will all anyone thinks about anymore is having more and money. well you might not be able to change the world but you can die knowing that you tried that you actually cared about something important and real. loved your poem,