I love how in the first stanza each ending word rhymed then in the following stanza you did abcb ... ect
Really made the write stand out!

This poem reminded me so very much of "March of the Penguins" I think it was called ... oh terrible memory ... lol

I loved the flow of the poem and the imagery created.

Their life is quite tough
A journey so long
They rely on their instinct
To help them stay strong
^^^
My favorite stanza!
A wonderful read .....

Luanne

This is great... i figured by now there would be a million more like it though... how was Happy Feet??