by Idiosyncratic May 10, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
If I could see your voice echo once more |
This is amazing!!! As i was reading it, i visualized every word you said. Keep up the good work!!! |
Wow there was something about this poem that reached out to me. I loved all the descriptions, they didnt seem to go over the top yet there was just enough to give your poem grace and structure. I loved how you decided against a rhyme scheme also, it made each line stand out more and made the reader think about what it was saying. Amazing metaphores.. this is one of my favorite poems.. and if you don't mind then I'm going to add it to my book of poetry (I will give you credit for it) thanx for recomending this one. |
I though it was great,the word choice was superb and i could feel all the emotions running through it, 5/5 |
by Vanessa
Well written excelent word choice, the emtions were dark, and deep, and the message was clear. YOu did a great job and deserve nothing less than 5/5 |
by Kaila
Very good |