I love this poem... the meaning in it took my breath away and the flow & wording was amazing!!!!! the poem all together was outrageous! 5/5

The story touched me as well. It must be a hard life to live though.

I liked your poem, I think the rhyming was alright. And I liked how you told the story in a poem, I could really imagine everything you described.

Keep writing. Let me know when you write a new poem, I would like to read it. =)

Very inspirational,touching,and the words chosen soo filled the poem with deep meanings and flow was perfect...Excellent work on this 1!....kp it up!..
easy 5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Such a such story is conveyed in this poem. I liked reading it a lot, though.

"Moved form one place to another
I missed and needed my mother"

^ In the first line, 'form' should be 'from'. I think sometimes the flow is a bit off, for example, in those (^) lines, the second line just doesn't seem to fit right (when read out).

Anyhow, it was still a good read. Nicely penned.

Hm.. I liked this poem because it showed the sadness of having to live in foster care however in the end it also showed that sometimes its better for the child. And thats what I truely belive that foster care can be better and much more healthier than living with a parent that cant keep their child. I loved the length of the stanzas they were really long and each one of them was like another chapter into the story, well done.