Luanne
This is a wonderful piece. The sadness is there but also hope.

Live for every moment
someday all life will cease
cleanse in the waters of the earth
and find your inner peace

I love this stanza and the message it gives. Excellent job!
Love Cindy

I absolutely loved it. And it had a wonderful message, so true. You can't move on in life unless you let go. 5/5. I loved it.
<3Raych

thanks for the comment on my poem :)

Luanne,

All I can say is... WOW. You sure nailed this one.

"Far beneath the surface
past the illusion of felicity
lay the demons of my life
begging for simplicity"

Absolutely loved that stanza. Great work. Wonderful rhythmn and beautiful message.

Loved it.

Always,
Jeannie

I liked the poem, it was deep, but easy to understand. It's message really rang true throughout the entire piece. I liked that the poem had sadness, but yet still had hope within it.

Very true. We must let bygones be bygones. Great poem 5/5

I Very much agree with you...My pastor always taught me to forgive others just for myself...so I can go on living without the pain and finally live in peace....
Excellent write mom....we seem to always agree with each other on issues like these!
Loved the way you wrote this!
Chelsey Pooh