This is an absolutely beautiful poem David. It was really wonderful. 5/5

Kalee

Well David
Whoever you wrote this poem to I'm sure loves you very much hehe
This poem is amazing and brings a smile to my face
Atelast there are guys out there who are amazing like you
Love always kaila

What a beautifully written piece ,well done ,and I agree with the above the girl you write for is extremely lucky.

Lov3ly po3m gr3at job 5/5
=========cynthia m. X]

Oh my gosh david i love it. that is so cute. 5/5

I hug your spirit,
I kiss your soul
Friendliness and love
Makes my heart whole

My favorite stanza... Out of all of them -in my mind- it flowed the best. Well I think this is a lovely piece of poem here... Thank's for sharing.

Happy writing.
Hannah-

This poem is so simple, yet so beautiful. It really shows your love for this truely lucky girl. Another great poem by you David. Well done. =] 5/5

Tammie

Im in love w/ this poem. its so simple..yet so meaningful.

Omg this is so sweet ^____^ *sniff* simply awesome!! 5!!!

Omg this is so sweet ^____^ *sniff* simply awesome!! 5!!!

Wow i really like this poem......great poem..5/5..........check out some of my poems if u would thankz...

Really, david, your poems take my words away...it's impossible to say more than: "wow"...
every poem you write is so wonderful that is difficult to know adjectivs to describe it that i didn't use before...(i'm no english-native speaker...=) )
ok, to be honest, this is THE poem...dunno who you mean(or if...) but she is sure lucky...
keep going always (because you have a great talent)
*isabel*

Very sweet and beautiful poem of love...

I hug your spirit,
I kiss your soul

^love these lines! nice job! All the best, Debbie

Thanks for your comment. well its not like you need comments lol well done! your poems are beautiful!
5 out of 5
Brooke

HOW CAN YOU BE SO GOOD?!?!?!

Dear David,
Your poems are soooooooooooooooooo
beautiful! I read them lots, just to feel better.
Plz keep writing them forever.

5/5 is not enough for you, my sweet friend!

Ingrid