by lost May 10, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
17 new problems |
by she
Like the last lines,great flow |
by homebound
Great job on this one! Filled with emotion and thought. The 2 last lines concluded the whole poem and made a strong final impact. keep it up! i cant wait to read more from you! |
Real emotional AWESOME!!! 5/5 :) |
WOW AWESOME POEM SO DEEP AND JUST GREAT 5/5 DEF! |
by Alma
Wow! powerful poem |