by BeautifulDisaster May 11, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I am a writer, |
Excellent poem. I think this is the best poem you've written. It's very unique, your word choice was excellent and your descriptions were so vivid and deep. I could relate to a bit of this as well. |
by tears i cry
Thats not all true though because you can change being suicidal i did otherwise great work 5/5 |
by Marc Ortiz
Well I really don't like repetitions sorry. I think it was a good poem.. Just a suggestion to put it in stanzas =) |
by Marius Laun
It was a nice piece of work. It like it. It was just sort of interesting becuase That is how a lot of people really are, they are more than just one thing. Keep up the good work |
by Sourav
Nice way to express the feelings... The i liked the style of the writing. |