Beautiful description of self. The word choice was amazing, and vividly descriptive. The emtions are strong and clear. I love this poem and it structure. The flow is flawless, keep writting, 5/5

This my dear...is perfect.
The emotion and pain scream through the words in this, really tugging at the reader's heart.
Flow was good throughout the poem, and you created a beautiful description of all the roles you play.
Beautiful work.

Nice way to express the feelings... The i liked the style of the writing.

It was a nice piece of work. It like it. It was just sort of interesting becuase That is how a lot of people really are, they are more than just one thing. Keep up the good work

Well I really don't like repetitions sorry. I think it was a good poem.. Just a suggestion to put it in stanzas =)

Thats not all true though because you can change being suicidal i did otherwise great work 5/5

Excellent poem. I think this is the best poem you've written. It's very unique, your word choice was excellent and your descriptions were so vivid and deep. I could relate to a bit of this as well.

Keep it up && Take Care! 5/5

-Shannon <3