Comments : The Price You Pay

  • 17 years ago

    by June

    No its not crap ,I've experienced alot in life but never had to deal with knowing someone addicted to drugs ,I can imagine there addiction can hurt thier nearest and dearest so very much.

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    As all your poems this one is great.
    to answer your guestion where am i in my
    addiction im clean 4 a few months but i think about getting high every min.of every day
    im waiting 4 the majic. but like john lennon
    said < LIFE IS THE S**T THAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU'LL WAITING FOR MOMMENTS THAT NEVER COME> JOHN IS THe man
    getting back to you this poem but this is not
    your mission. your mission if you choose to
    accept is read other addicts poems and write down thier f**k up story for instance
    the woman i love the girl of my dreams
    heion addict and i can't do anything about it
    I KNOW she'll never quit this is my life a
    life of total s**t <thats the price you pay
    to play the game> this is what i want
    read as many poems as you can. I 'll send you some good ones when i see them gather
    them for a least a week and see what you
    you come up with. there one on there now
    something with daddy in the title. that one about how the cycle goes on send me your
    email and as i read new ones i'll send them
    my email is cyguy1234@yahoo.com
    aim is cygindle1 cy

  • 17 years ago

    by stephanie vega

    Damn this one is good its so hard to get clean and this poem really means something to me

  • 17 years ago

    by Kia

    Wow i like this one i think that it is very good... i dont think its crap at all

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    Everyone is right its not crap ,its the truth ,it is good of you to reach out to people in need,who knows maybe your words will be what they need to get them through one more night clean,great work Dave.