Hate

by Allison   May 11, 2007


My hate for you grows
With every passing day
I cringe every time
That you look my way

You act like you care
But I see deep down
The blackness of your soul
Is causing me to drown

I'm suffocating now
All you do is smile
You watch me as I die
And laugh all the while

The sadness of my life
Is happiness to you
I hope that when I die
You'll see the hate you grew

Here comes my final breath
Despair now fills my lungs
My soul has shriveled dry
And lays were death has hung

~Another one that I wrote when me and my friend were fighting.

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  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is soo good. You gad a lot of emotion in here which i loved and i can tell how angry you were! 5/5

    <UnToLd TrUtH>

  • 17 years ago

    by ruby

    I really loved it!
    you used words that
    had some hatred and
    anger in you...it was
    really good...keep up the
    good work :]

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Great poem...your emotions are clearly portrayed in this 1 which makes the poem special!...excellently penned!!...but maybe changing the title will mk the poem fit better into this category..just suggestion tht's all....otherwise the poem is as good the way it is.kp writing..easy 5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Wow there is a lot of anger in this one. I liked it though and it also has a nice flow. Another 5/5

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