Hey dude,
im proud to be the first person to comment this poem,
as a guy im telling you im so proud of you to write such a poem that deal with reality. very ture... it is unfortunate but, reality of this life.
great job
keep it up

I liked it, its very cool, i dont know what else to say exept, 5/5

Cool advise....Good One
5/5

God bless u

Amazingly done. you truly got yurself some talent!! keep up the outstanding work =)
great write!
=)