Beautifully written!!..simple truth penned amazingly well!!short and to the point...but all the same...Great work!!Kp up de good wrk!!
easy 5/5
xxPoojaxx

Thats the way it is, you have a nack for writing what other people dont want to ask because they are afraid, 5/5

Powerful poem. It's scary how niave we are as children. But the truth comes full force as we grow up!

Note: "We finally new what was real"
"new" should be "knew".
But anyway. GREAT poem.

Josie

I love the ending to this...very powerful and hard hitting, and the questions really make you think about things.
I liked how you started out with everything perfect in the beginning and then moved onto the harsher realites of life.

I liked how you ended this peice, you started out with anger and such but you ended it on such a soft note about how thats just the way it is. And the three questions are ones that I've thought about myself quite often. Nice job. I liked this.