by AlaSkA May 11, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Half man half machine, |
by Spirit
Dispear |
Very unique feel to this. Good write, not great though I thought it could be better. Your use of wording was good. Keep it up. |
Half man half machine, |
I simply love the way you wrote this. |
Very interesting poem, the flow and structure where both very well. I liked your choice of words and the way it was all put together to make a short to the point peice of art. Keep up the great work. |