by Brittany C
Great poem. It has a nice flow to it. The only problem I could see was that it is short. But I did like it. 5/5 |
by Vanessa
Makes one think. Short but brillant. the word choice was excellent, the flow was good, dare to be diffrent for that 5/5 you deserve nothing less. |
by Narphangu
Haha, I loved it! |
I thought it was very good, i had to read it a few times to completley understand it, but its truly a good poem, 5/5 |
Hmmm.. Ive read this a few times and I cant really understand the meaning of it.. so because of that I cant really give you a comment.. I'm REALLY sorry. |
by Taylor Lyn
This poem is interesting, to say the least. Very intruguing, the line about Rosencrantz throws it off...causes you to think, which I like. Not many people are going to remember these characters from Hamlet, which is cool that you included references to these characters. Definitely 5/5 from me. |
The poem is just great...very very beautiful..perfect...incredible..amazing..lol... what not!!...i love this 1....the word choice is just perfect and i really don't knw hw u can just so easily put in so much of power and beauty to a short poem...Amazing write!! |
All i can say is wow. i've never read a poem like this. way to keep the individuality up |
I don't like the last line, but again, you kept me interested until the end. Nicely done. There's not much more to say, sorry. =/ |
by seymour
Very complex, had to read twice^.^ |
by Startle Me
I pictured a half man with everyone staring at him. |
by Courtney Lang
I loved this poem. |
Your work really does remind me of the beginings of books. I want to write, produce, and direct some day and I think you'd be a good author. 5. |
by Marc Ortiz
Another fine written piece by you, I really like your choice of words.. And again.. I wish you made it longer.. Nonetheless a good read. Keep up the good work. |
by Melpomene
Now this, this piece was interesting. I love poetry that has to make me think and this poem does just that. It is not spelt right out infront of me so that from the first line I know exactly what is going on it keeps me interesting wanting to know whats going on. Vocab was stunning I must say I truely love the way you write. This poem was definitly not cliched it reminded me of being uncomfortable with myself for some reason. Overall well done a 5/5 from me. ~Mel |
by Nix
It is very interesting, I like the idea but I don't really understand what this poem means to you. Few lines are very effective and you wrote short piece but you still managed to create powerful atmosphere, with just a few words, that is really impressing. Anyway, I like it very much, words that you used are superbly picked. I enjoyed in every line, this piece has some special tone that makes it excellent. Well done! |
Very interesting poem, the flow and structure where both very well. I liked your choice of words and the way it was all put together to make a short to the point peice of art. Keep up the great work. |
I simply love the way you wrote this. |
Half man half machine, |
Very unique feel to this. Good write, not great though I thought it could be better. Your use of wording was good. Keep it up. |