Comments : Staccato Memories

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Dispear
    honestly i felt complete
    and utter dispear
    the last moments of this cyborg
    that you created in you mind
    filled me with sorrow
    funny how in just a few lines
    you told a lifetime story
    i could feel hopelessness
    i could feel pain
    i could not feel a fighters will
    and in those finial moments that i felt
    it was as if this creation's life flashed
    before my eyes

    Wow

    thank you for the read.
    it was felt

    (~:SamMayo