Ok when i first saw the title of this poem I was thinking to myself, oh here we go another cliche love poem but this poem brought an acrostic poem to a whole new level. I think your vocab is quite amazing to tell you the truth it was strong and held alot of depth making me want to carry on reading until the end of it. The emotion i must say was really beautiful and flowed amazingly throughout this poem. I honestly cannot find a flaw within this poem which amazed me. Well done on a nicely written love poem~mel

Well done you have wrote a love poem that did not bore me, even my own bore me. but this was a lso a rhyming acrstic, with an diffrent rhyming scheme, amazingly well done. 5/5