Face Down

by I Seem to be the Heartless   May 11, 2007


I have fallen
Face down,
Face down
On the ground.
At first there is silence -
Not a sound -
But not for long.
Everybody around
Bursts out laughing
Laughing so hard.
They're lying on the ground
Killing themselves with laughter
As I lay face down
On the ground.

11May07
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This was done for a contest.

I know it's bad, so there's no need to tell me that :)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Lmao, nah! It's not bad, it made me laugh cos it's something that i can envision happening for real! lmao
    Excellent!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Lol I actually did fall on my face once, sssoo embarrassing. And no its not bad, its better than mine haha!