Comments : Nightly Companions

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    What a excellent piece you have penned. The heartache and sadness can be felt in your words. The depths of lonliness cry from this write.

    It taunts me with hunger that's never fulfilled
    Upon the dark thoughts of a memory's chill
    Comes the nightly companions reminder of pain
    Caught fast in the mind as their song starts again.

    This stanza touched me so much.
    Great job!
    ~BRAVO~BRAVO~
    Love Cindy