by I Seem to be the Heartless May 11, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Here I stand |
by MaSkEdSoUl
I dont know if it was a good idea to repeat 'by myself'. I thought it was a little too much but everyone has there own opinions. Other than that I liked it, kinda feel like that alot. Anyways, Good work!! |
I really liked how you used the title several times throughout the poem. It really got your put across and added emphasis to what you were saying. Good job. |