Comments : By Myself

  • 17 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    I really liked how you used the title several times throughout the poem. It really got your put across and added emphasis to what you were saying. Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I dont know if it was a good idea to repeat 'by myself'. I thought it was a little too much but everyone has there own opinions. Other than that I liked it, kinda feel like that alot. Anyways, Good work!!