Wonderful poem dear! It speaks the truth to me. If society continues as it is now the end is growing close. *5/5*

Alyson

Beautiful work...great theme!....perfect choice of words and u brought out the truth beautifully and the whole poem is amazing!
Kp it up!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Love the poem great job...5/5.......your are a really good writter......oh and if you will can you please rate and comment on my poems thankz.....

Wow thats really good nice flow and very true great writing :D 5/5

This is a very sad reality. beautiful and truthful write. 5/5 never stop!

` Liz =]

Nice poem!!

read my poems please
thankyou!

Great Job! Some are scared to speak out!

I really agree with your words here, truer words never spoken..pain slef inflicted indeed! great work! Timothy r

I loved this poem, the message is so true and you can tell it comes from the heart. Good job 5/5.

This is a guatanteed eye-opener in awareness to all the corruption that we see in society today

Amazing and touchful!!!

Love your poems they flow so nicley, and i was hoping that you could find it in your time to vote and comment on some of my poems, it would be greatly appreciated
thank you.. all the best, the lady of the silver valley

I loved it.
Its emotion was bursting and this was well written.
5/5

~Ally

Very, Very good, and i completly agree with this poem. I'm offically a fan... 5/5

Isn't it the truth..

Unfortunately the people who need to read this are too busy burning our children's futures to bother reading poetry. One canonly hope that St Peter is surrounded by great poets. An excellently built piece of work. Neil.

I soooo wrote about this in the paper!
only it sounded more like an article than a poem, obvioiusly.