by Annissha May 11, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
love is
**if u read please tell me What u think and what i need 2 improve on and please rate and comment, thanks!** |
Great poem. This is totally true but you can fix the errors a bit, clean it up and it would be perfect. |
Great poem. This is totally true but you can fix the errors a bit, clean it up and it would be perfect. |
by Robert
This was a well done poem I enjoyed the images and the way you gave the comtemp in each work well done Plot121 |
by Special k
Wow. My friend went through that same thing. |
by tomuchhurt
So so so true with alot of guys! love your poem really cool and realistic. check out my poem called guardian angel. its the total opposite of your poem |