So so so true with alot of guys! love your poem really cool and realistic. check out my poem called guardian angel. its the total opposite of your poem
Love: Kamille

Wow. My friend went through that same thing.
I remember that. But yes its a good poem and thanks for commenting my poems it meant a lot to me. And maybe you should try the way i write my poems its easier. But whatever floats your boat. =D Try the AbCb poems. there easy. well much love! </3
-Kera&hearts;

This was a well done poem I enjoyed the images and the way you gave the comtemp in each work well done Plot121

Great poem. This is totally true but you can fix the errors a bit, clean it up and it would be perfect.

Good job though!!!

Overall 4/5

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Great poem. This is totally true but you can fix the errors a bit, clean it up and it would be perfect.

Good job though!!!

Overall 4/5

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