The words you used were so new and fresh. added spice to this poem. it was so dark and mysterious.

well done and great discription. 5/5 David

Very nicely written. Great job!!!

Josie

So dark, so beautiful. The way you described sorrow is so wonderful, it scares me! I love it! Keep it up!

Interesting poem, it is unique and topic is great. I like atmosphere that you create, you described emotions in this poem excellent.
5/5

I like it. its vry catchy <333