Wow that was really good! it was an enjoyable poem, and i liked reading it... the flow was great.. i give it a 5/5 and thank you so much for the comment, it means alot

Hey, I thought it was a really nice poem, that expresssed alot of emotion, I especially liked these 2 lines: 'The pain is the price
The tears are the tax'
Keep it up x

Hey wow, amazing poem! lol just very expressive and beautiful to read...i agree with gypsy, "the pain is the price, the tears are the tax" are just two amazing lines that stood out, great job

---tara