Hey this was a good way of writing... i like the way every stanza begins and the questions are also a good idea...

Overall a well writen poem =)

Well its pretty good torms, just a few grammer mistakes, but grammer doesnt count, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them comming tormy!!

This is a great poem wonderful job though i cant tell if he is a good guy to love or not lol but good job anyways:D:D

keenan

This is beautiful, ma'dear [pink] panther. I loved how it progressed while shifting from a rather charming tone to a mournful, gloomy end.

"...Of a boy i know
Known him for a while now
And,boy,is he sweet?
Makes me more than melt

...Of a boy i Like
Like him for awhile now
And,boy is he gorgeous?
Blew my mind!"

Haha. Those were great starting lines! It reminds me of our dear -pizza boy-, but then again I think you mean someone else...

As always, it's an enjoyable read and is still finely penned despite this roadblock of yours. Keep them coming, sweets! Love, Debberrs 5/5

"...Of a boy i know
Known him for a while now
And,boy,is he sweet?
Makes me more than melt

...Of a boy i Like
Like him for awhile now
And,boy is he gorgeous?
Blew my mind!"
Excellent lines..Good opening and i loved the style u've used in this 1...great work..touching and powerful in it's own way,...kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

Excellent piece of poetry you have here truely amazing and i found it quite good since you havnt written in awhile. Nice style well done with this. Great work~mel

Get writing more yoU!

Wow, I really liked this. It had like a jumpy type of flow to it. Atleast that's how I read it.
But great job...5/5
((Amber))

Couldnt have said it better myself

i love the structure