To Paint A Rainbow

I look forward to reading more of your poetry ~ this was terrific! Although I enjoyed the entire poem, this is my favorite:
The sun it glared,
It flashed, it flared.
Revealing the honesty within;
exposing the skin.

Again, great job!

"The rain fell.
Ignorant, stubborn, blinkered.
Soaked umbrellas shrouding faces;
anoraks smothering skin.
The truth disguised." this was perfect expression.

Wow! This is simply amazing. The style is very unique, creating emphasis in the important lines and effective pauses. The topic is creative, blending nature with love. Reading it, it flowed very well, with excellent word use. Detailed description created beautiful imagery with such a strong ending to a wonderful poem. I couldn't suggest anything to improve this at all.
This is definately a favorite of mine. It's the first of yours i've read and i'm sure i'll be reading more. You sure do have talent. =] 5/5

Tammie

This is an amzing poem... really unique in its own way.. veryyy gooodd

5/5 excellent poem love the style you've used to write a thank you to someone you love. well done. keep writing