Self-Made Disease

by skynerraw   May 11, 2007


This self-made disease
Stay out of it please
This battle against my weight
Against my body I hate
You can't help me now
So it, you must allow
Sitting in the bathroom crying
As I am slowly dying
Why don't I, in the start
Stab myself in the heart
Save me from this pain
There is nothing to gain
I'm destroying my life
Causing a strife
I used to hate people like me
But now that part I can't see
I used to think it was stupid
Until I was hit by cupid
I became so self conscious it hurt
I look at myself like I'm dirt
Who will help me? You?
There is nothing you can do
So stay out of this please
My self-made disease

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Interesting job. I liked the way that you chose to lay this peice out. I think that, it wouldn't have worked any other way because its like one big speech kind of thing. The only critique that I have is that I think it needs a period on the very last line. Other than that nice work.

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Ah, eating disorders can make anyone feel like crap. i use to think everyone that had one was stupid too til it happened to me. now i feel sorry for everyone that has ever went through it :(
    5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Very well written, you did another excellent job, I don't have an critism to offer you thuis time, It seemed perfect to me. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Great work again!...Good work!....the subject u chose to write about if powerful...Kp up the great job!5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    ....I have that disease too hun!! not very fun is it, but i loved the poem, you put it down so well, great work with the rhyming too, the flow was flawless, hope you can cure it!!

    xoxo Lucy

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